Friday, June 29, 2007

two drafts

Below are two poems I started last night for my God Damsel manuscript. I'll keep them up over the weekend, giving hundreds of people the opportunity to read them. It's also possible an archiving bot could cache these drafts making them available in this form for all of eternity.

[snip]

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At 8:36 PM, Blogger Didi Menendez said...

Do you know of any hot latino gay men? I know of a bunch of them. However they don't write poetry.

Nice poems.

Not sure about the theme here of the poems but they are nice even so.

Didi

 
At 8:40 PM, Blogger Didi Menendez said...

And while we are at it, do you know of any single middle age men who are single and in a higher income and don't need viagra for me?

oh I may only be kidding...

or maybe not.

d.

 
At 9:42 AM, Blogger sam of the ten thousand things said...

Enjoyed both poems, Reb. Especially [Intro]. Thanks for posting them.

 
At 10:25 AM, Blogger Emily Lloyd said...

Jeez, Reb. These rock. The best stuff I've seen from anyone in a while. Thanks for waking my interest.

 
At 10:25 AM, Blogger Didi Menendez said...

post script...I found who I was looking for. I was being stubborn. Now lets see if he submits.

Thanks again -

Didi

 
At 1:46 AM, Blogger shann said...

how didi got latino men out of that is really funny!

I'm not sure about where you're going (as in maybe these examples are not 'stand-alone' pieces) more context would be useful to me- I have always admired the way you work with disconnective language, making it connect, I envy that.

but I'm pretty concrete narrative style- what do i know?

 
At 2:18 AM, Blogger Reb said...

Thanks for the comments everyone. I've taken them down now -- and am still working of them as well as others.

Shann, while they are part of a bigger project/series, they're intended to each stand alone.

 

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