Gideon's NaPoWriMo
Daddy's Poem
Here to here
All the way home
A little here
A little here
Back to the lake
Boat to lake
Boat to lake
Luck to here, all the way home
Look to here, I'll be right home
Labels: NaPoWriMo
posted by RL @ 10:42 AM
5 comments
5 Comments:
Great poem! I love those ending lines.
He's a natural!
He's also a bit difficult to understand, so it's possible that I influenced a word during transcription. (Luck may have been look, but it sounded like "luck" and when I asked him, he said yes.)
Nah, I should stop trying to take credit -- he's my baby Oppenheimer!
This is a good first effort, we look forward to more and better!! Crack that whip!
Wait, do we want a poet or not??? oh no!!
the less you want a poet, the more likely you're gonna get one. i think that's one of reb's proverbs. :) great poem, gideon!
takes after his dad, i am sure
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