Tuesday, April 07, 2009

Gideon's NaPoWriMo

Daddy's Poem


Here to here

All the way home

A little here

A little here

Back to the lake

Boat to lake

Boat to lake

Luck to here, all the way home

Look to here, I'll be right home


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5 Comments:

At 11:03 AM, Blogger Matthew Thorburn said...

Great poem! I love those ending lines.

 
At 11:11 AM, Blogger Reb said...

He's a natural!

He's also a bit difficult to understand, so it's possible that I influenced a word during transcription. (Luck may have been look, but it sounded like "luck" and when I asked him, he said yes.)

Nah, I should stop trying to take credit -- he's my baby Oppenheimer!

 
At 12:18 PM, Blogger Chris said...

This is a good first effort, we look forward to more and better!! Crack that whip!

Wait, do we want a poet or not??? oh no!!

 
At 9:12 AM, Blogger shanna said...

the less you want a poet, the more likely you're gonna get one. i think that's one of reb's proverbs. :) great poem, gideon!

 
At 9:57 PM, Blogger Rauan Klassnik said...

takes after his dad, i am sure

 

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